24 April 2013

A Reflection of My Time In English 111


                In all honesty, from the beginning of this course I had not set goals or aspirations. I had taken this course before in the past and had to drop it due to personal reasons. I remember at that time, feeling easily discouraged and frustrated because I could never seem to find my focus. However, this semester when I aspired to take the course again, and see it to its completion, I only had one goal—to get it over with. Though this semester began with the desire to simply get this course out of the way, I found myself starting to develop other goals through-out the semester. I began to actually take an interest in building my writing skills and learning as much as I could in the time offered to me. As the course continued, I started seeing this class as an opportunity; rather than a hassle.

                What first sparked my interest in this class were the reading materials assigned. I actually enjoyed most of the readings and their messages, and found myself developing my own interpretations of the readings. When I would take notes from the readings, I’d use brackets to write my own thoughts on what was being said in a sentence or two and creating a new message that was my own.  For example, In Joel Westheimer’s “No Child Left Thinking,” he says, “The kinds of goals and practices commonly represented in curricula that hope to foster democratic citizenship usually have more to do with voluntarism, charity, and obedience that with democracy.”

I responded to the issue of obedience in my notes, like this: “(Obedience is the problem, listening to authority figures without doubt and taking education at face-value rather than the student deciphering their own understanding of a subject’s matter is what crushes the ability to use critical thinking skills.)” By doing this, I believe I was able to use these thoughts from my notes for my papers later-on. I also think this helped me to build upon my critical-thinking skills. During the readings, I started to develop the desire to take as much information from the sources as possible to create an idea of my own to express in future papers. I also found the peer review to be very helpful in this course when writing my papers. While utilizing the peer reviews, I felt I had more of an opportunity to get specific feedback for my essays. I appreciated knowing exactly what the weaknesses were in my papers so I could go back and address those issues. To me, receiving constructive criticism pushes me to be a better writer.

                The process of taking extensive notes, becoming interested in reading materials, and participating in peer reviews, ultimately helped me to be a stronger writer and utilize my critical thinking skills. My original goal was to just get through this class; Now, I believe I met a more important goal, to be a stronger writer.

AMS


Hillary Hines

ENG. 111

3 April 2013

AMS: Lack of Senses

            The key barrier to adult learning is the absence of engaging more than one of a student’s senses at a time during educational experiences. The norm seems to be—in a classroom environment—that students sit in their seats and listen to an instructor’s lecture. Inherently, students have been taught to just listen and remember. However, when a person sets about learning a task individually, does that person just listen to someone explain how the task is accomplished? Or, does that individual attempt such a task repeatedly and learn through trial and error? Take learning to ride a bicycle, for example: the process involves sitting in the seat, pedaling, and holding the handle bars while another person supports the individual on the bike to ensure they do not fall until they are accustomed to the feel and function of the bicycle. Now, imagine if that person had to learn to ride a bicycle by simply lecture alone; would they have ever accomplished this learning task? The answer is ultimately no, they would learn the concept of riding a bicycle, but not its actual function. Learning the function of riding a bicycle is a tangible learning experience.

            Learning by concept alone—or by lecture, is not enough to leave a long-lasting impression. In Paulo Freire’s, “The “Banking” Concept of Education,” Freire describes learning by concept alone as the “banking” concept, which means, “Instead of communicating, the teacher issues communiques and makes deposits which the students patiently receive, memorize, and repeat” (Freire 240). The trouble with this form of education is that once these students are no longer required to repeat this information, it will be discarded and forgotten because such information was so inanimate to them. Freire then continues, “the scope of action allowed to the students extends only as far as receiving, filing, and storing the deposits” (Freire 240). During a lecture, this is ultimately the only option many students—if not all—have to categorize information they are “absorbing.” Susan E. Cooperstein, User Education Librarian at Notre Dame, and Elizabeth Kocevar-Weidinger, Instruction Librarian at Longwood University, support and extend upon Freire’s claims in their article, “Beyond Active Learning: a Constructivist Approach to Learning,” through this statement, “Students are not passive receptacles. They do not easily process or transfer what they passively receive” (Cooperstein & Kocevar-Weidinger 142). Taking the bicycle example into consideration, the individual would learn to ride the bicycle by going beyond lectured on the how-to and instead pursuing the actual action and experience of riding the bicycle. Freire proceeds to make a called point against learning by concept, “Implicit in the banking concept is the assumption of a dichotomy between human beings and the world: a person is merely in the world, not with the world or with others; the individual is spectator, not re-creator” (Freire 243). In order to truly learn, students cannot act as simple spectators of the lesson or subject. Students must be given the option to re-create what they have learned through tangible experiences to enforce a deeper, long-lasting understanding. Hence, utilizing the senses which have been numbed in a classroom setting for too long.

            After a person learns to ride a bicycle, do they forget? Of course not, because they learned this task through the utilization of all their senses, not just one. Susan E. Cooperstein and Elizabeth Kocevar-Weidinger suggest, “Abstract concepts become meaningful, transferable, and retained because they are attached to performance of an activity. The activities lead to concepts; the students construct the meaning” (Cooperstein & Elizabeth Kocevar-Weidinger 145). When a student engages in the actions of learning a task, instead of merely listening to the concept of the activity, the student is able to discover a deeper and long-lasting understanding of the activity. The student is then able to engage in the conceptual aspect of the activity—also known as the lecture, with new found understanding. The activity should come before the concept, in order to promote effective learning. According to Daniel J. Glisczinski, in his article “Lighting Up The Mind: Transforming Learning Through The Applied Scholarship Neuroscience,” “the body and the brain are part of the same continuous organism, and what happens to the body happens to the brain…” (Glisczinski 8). Here, it is apparent that learning through activity—while engaging all of the senses, causes the body and brain to permanently remember the task, forever changing and enhancing the ability of memory retention. Students are used to lectures coming before engaging in any sort of activity. Looking back at the bicycle example: by engaging all of an individual’s senses toward the learning task of riding a bicycle, they are able to understand the concept of riding a bicycle with perfect clarity. This process could then be explained to others; however, other individuals would still have to engage in the activity of riding a bicycle in order to fully comprehend the concept for themselves. This is why teaching by lecture alone does not work and cannot promote long-lasting memory retention.

            Only from learning through tangible experience can students be able to develop memory retention from short-term to long-term. Once an individual has performed an action, they area able to understand its significance and will not be liable to forget the process of said action. According to Cooperstein and Kocevar-Weidinger, “through activity students discover their own truths” (Cooperstein & Kocevar-Weidinger 142). When giving a student an activity, they develop questions and their own answers through the process of utilizing their senses; this process supports and nurtures critical thinking skills. Glisczinski extends upon active learning and its benefits, “Enduring learning, characterized by deep understanding, emanates from experience that engages multiple senses and learning modalities” (Glisczinski 3). Which means, to truly understand what it is students are learning, they have to physically experience the subject in order for it to have any affect. Lectures are constructed so one person generally speaks and an audience listens, numbing the other senses to the potential of long-term memory. Continuing with Glisczinski, “While hearing is one route to knowing, it’s power for long-term recall or behavior change is limited if not partnered with metacognition and deliberate action” (Glisczinski 7). Re-capping the bicycle example, an individual could explain the concept of riding a bike to another; however, the process cannot be truly learned unless the auditory experience is coupled with the more tangible experience. As Freire mentioned, through simple auditory experience the individual may feel “in the world” as spectators and instead be “with the world” as recreators. Lectures ultimately make students feel  detached from the lesson being portrayed and they inevitably learn nothing of use to them. Only through tangible learning experiences will students immerse themselves in the lesson and develop useful knowledge through the enlightment of sensory interactions and stimulation.

            If more than one sense cannot be stimulated during educational experiences, adult learning will not be successful; this is our barrier. Learning by concept alone produces students with a sense of detachment from the lesson being portrayed to them. Through the student may retain the concepts of the lesson, the concepts will soon be discarded when they are no longer needed because the student is not able to relate such concepts to tangible experiences. Engaging all of a student’s senses through hands-on experiences—such as riding a bicycle, students are able to retain the experience and describe the concepts because, as Glisczinski stated, “What happens to the body happens to the brain” (Glisczinski 8) creating long-lasting—if not permanent, memory retention and recall. In the famous words of Confucius, “I hear and I forget. I see and I remember. I do and I understand” (Glisczinski 3).  Paulo Freire, Daniel J. Glisczinski, and Susan E. Cooperstein and Elizabeth Kocevar-Weidinger, all share similar views that educational experiences are deemed unsuccessful when not coupled with materials to stimulate multiple senses. The standard lecture is not enough to capture student’s profound interest or leave a more permanent, long-lasting impression on memory retention. To relate to Confucius: hearing education will soon be forgotten, seeing education will be remembered; but for how long? Doing education promotes understanding and the utilization of the senses—leaving long-lasting impressions. By promoting active learning and going beyond the norm of the simple lecture, students could permanently understand both the concept and the function of what they are learning; making learning experiences more applicable and useful to everyday life.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

           

 


 

 

Works Cited


 

Freire, P. (2007). The "Banking" Concept of Education. In R. Norgaard, Composing Knowledge: Readings for College Writers (pp. 239-251). Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's.

Glisczinski, D. J. (2011). Lighting Up the Mind: Transforming Learning Through the Applied Scholarship of Cognitive Neuroscience. International Journal for the Scholarship of Teaching and Learning, 1-11.

Kocevar-Weidinger, E., & Cooperstein, S. E. (2004). Beyond Active Learning: A Constructivist Approach to Learning. Emerald Volume 32, 141-148.

 

 

 

Rhetorical Analysis


Hillary Hines

English 111

19 January 2013

Rhetorical Analysis: Dancing with Professors

            “Dancing with Professors: The Trouble with Academic Prose” by Patricia Nelson Limerick, proposes that academics direct their writings to benefit both specialist and non-specialist audiences. In doing so, both parties would be able to engage in open discussions and have a broader understanding of academic writings. Limerick suggests that academics believe writings which are unintelligible, indicate sophistication. (pg. 120) This is a completely misguided assumption, on the part of the academics. If students are unable to decipher what they are reading in their studies, then there is no way for them to absorb the knowledge shared in the piece. Limerick’s views on academic prose are relatable to any experience a student may have had in a college class-room. Limerick supports her theories with creative, but valid, evidence and comparisons which allows her audience to be completely immersed by her message.

            Limerick directs her audience’s attention to the dull impact that academic sentence structures induce. Limerick pusher her audience into the mind of what a student may feel while reading these sentences, “These words and ideas are nearly suffocated. Get them air!” (pg. 121) By doing this, Limerick has created a sense of relation between the reader and the frustrated student. In a college setting, it is not unheard of to commonly run into long, suffocating sentences which cause a student to panic. I believe Limerick’s ability to push her audience into the mind of another, is one of her strongest weapons in this piece. If a reader can relate to the writing, then they can be inspired and changed by its message. This allows Limerick to express her message loud and clear to her audience, keeping their undivided attention until the end of her article.

            Limerick proceeds to place professors and students on equal academic ground, stating, “Everyone knows that today’s college students cannot write, but few seem willing to admit that the professors who denounce them are not doing much better.” (pg. 121) Limerick took away the separate titles of “professor” and “student,” and instead, proclaimed both parties as victims to the unintelligible nature of academic prose. If a professor is unable to understand academic writings in class, then the professor is unable to translate the message clearly to their students. In turn, students will be unable to respond to the academic writings; which they use as a reference for the class in the first place. By Limerick creating an equal ground between students and professors, she enabled her audience to understand that professors are not the enemy, but victims, as well to an awful writing style.

            By far, the best argument made in Limerick’s piece was a quote she had heard from a Classics professor, “We must remember…that professors are the ones nobody wanted to dance with in high school.” (pg. 122) This message causes a reader to be drawn into the piece, due to its humorous conduct, in order to discover the purpose behind this quote. Limerick goes on to explain this entertaining quote, “Professors are often shy, timid, and even fearful people, and under those circumstances, dull difficult prose can function as a kind of camouflage.” (pg. 122) Limerick is explaining that no one can question the professor’s opinions of message because no one can begin to comprehend what is being communicated in the professor’s writings—hence camouflage. The professor is able to hide his/her ideas effectively from their audience due to fear of being questioned or ridiculed for their observations. In this case, Limerick was able to entertain her audience, while accurately coaxing out the idea of academics hiding behind their writings due to their own insecurities. 

            I believe, Limerick communicated her theories effectively to her audience. I think Limerick wanted to inform her audience that they are not any-less intelligent for not understanding the complexity of academic prose. I think she also wanted her audience to comprehend the fact that academics write the way they do in order to avoid criticism and to make themselves appear as if their intelligence surpasses that of non-specialists. In my opinion, academics do this because they still hold onto the mentality, and insecurities, of a high school boy/girl, too shy to ask another to dance. Academically, specialists fear having attention drawn to them, just as they did in high school. I think it is appropriate to end this paper with Limerick’s quote: “We must remember…that professors are the ones nobody wanted to dance with in high school.” (pg. 122)

 

 


 

 


 


Works Cited


 

Limerick, Patricia Nelson. "Dancing with Professors: The Trouble with Academic Prose." New York Times Book Review (1993).

 

 

Compare/Contrast Essay


Hillary Hines

English 111

8 January 2013

Compare/Contrast Essay: Joel Westheimer and Paulo Freire

            Joel Westheimer’s “No Child Left Thinking: Democracy At-Risk In American Schools,” and Paulo Freire’s “The “Banking” Concept Of Education,” share many similarities, as well as differences. Both author share the idea that critical-analysis, or independent thinking, is being diminished by an obedient approach to education; however, the authors have different views of who, or what, is at fault for this display of compliant learning. Joel Westheimer believes the government’s method of limiting critical analysis through reform policies, is causing students to have a limited education in politics; making our country more of a totalitarian nation, instead of a democratic one. Paulo Freire’s arguments are focused mainly around the relationship between students and teachers, causing students to adapt to a way of learning where the teacher is the authority. In either case, students are not truly able to learn if they are not able to exercise their critical-thinking skills.

            Learning has become an issue of repetition, students take in facts and figures only to repeat them back to the source on command. Westheimer and Freire both share this view of obedient education through statements in their articles. Westheimer stated, “Current school reform policies and many classroom practices too often reduce teaching and learning to exactly the kind of mindless rule-following that makes students unable to make principled stands that have long been associated with American democracy.” (Westheimer) While Freire stated, “Instead of communicating, the teacher issues communiqués and makes deposits which the students patiently receive, memorize, and repeat.” (Freire) If these ideas were put together as if they originated from the same source, this would completely describe the issues of learning and teaching in today’s schools. Students are expected to take what they are taught by a teacher, or authority figure, at face-value and without argument. These statements by Freire and Westheimer differentiate from one another by the source of this issue and by how the ideas are being portrayed. Westheimer believes the problem resides in reform policies, while Freire portrays the problem resides in teachers and students viewing themselves as separate entities, instead of equals. Westheimer states that this issue causes “mindless rule-following,” while Freire states that the relation between students and teachers causes obedience and teaching that only instructs repetition. However, this could also be viewed as a similarity. The idea of “mindless rule-following,” provided by Westheimer, could be viewed as equivalent to the idea, provided by Freire, of students allowing themselves to be “depositories” for unquestionable facts and figures.

            Oppression is another shared idea among these articles; however, it is understood by both authors in a different sense. Westheimer states, “In the past five years, hundreds of schools, districts, states, and even the federal government have enacted policies that seek to restrict critical analysis of historical and contemporary events in the school curriculum.” (Westheimer) In this example, students may feel oppressed because they are unable to devise their own assumptions and understandings of what occurred in history. They are, again, expected and directed to take the teacher’s interpretation as absolute fact. However, isn’t history just that? His-story, another’s interpretation of the events which have affected the present and the future? Freire states, “Projecting an absolute ignorance onto others, a characteristic of the ideology of oppression, negates education and knowledge as processes of inquiry.” (Freire) Here, students feel oppressed by the notion that they are not equal, in stature, to their teachers, the authority. Through this understanding, students feel their individual ideas are unimportant and they are there to simply learn from their superiors. However, Freire also mentions how students do not understand that they also educate the teachers. Teachers are blind to this idea as well, due to feeling as if they are empowered by their position of authority. Both articles portray the idea that students are expected, and directed, to take what they are being taught as absolute, unquestionable “truth.”

            Regulating how much a student may learn about their society is also a commonly shared ideology between these articles. Westheimer states, “An increasing number of students are getting little to no education about how government works, the Constitution, the Bill of Rights, the evolution of social movements, and U.S. and world history.” (Westheimer) This statement, shows how students are not being educated as to how their society works so they cannot begin to comprehend how to affect change within their society. This, in turn, is the basis of how reform policies are influencing a totalitarian nation. Freire claims, “It follows logically from the banking notion of consciousness that the educator’s role is to regulate the way the world “enters into” the students.” (Freire) This statement, in itself, summarizes and enhances Westheimer’s notion about how students are limited about how much they understand about the workings of their society. Freire’s statement better describes how teachers/reform policies control and regulate their understanding of the world which surrounds them. Students are being taught how to blend with society, rather than how to affect change, for the better, within said society. This method of education produces people who are passive, or compliant, individuals; hence, forming a totalitarian society for the future.

            Though Freire and Westheimer have differences in opinion as to whom, or what, is at fault for this state of obedient education; both, are able to agree that it is diminishing a student’s ability to practice analytical-thinking and maintain a democratic nation for the future. By using the method of repetition in students, the students become oppressed and lose the desire to think for themselves. If teachers, or reform policies, are able to oppress these students, they can easily influence obedient academic behaviors within said students. Once students are successfully influenced to be compliant individuals, teachers are able to regulate how much they may understand about their world; which isn’t enough for the student to affect change and support a democratic nation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Works Cited


 

Freire, Paulo. "The "Banking" Concept of Education." Norgaard, Rolf. Composing Knowledge: Readings for College Writers. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2007.

Westheimer, Joel. "No Child Left Thinking: Democracy At-Risk in American Schools." Education and Democracy (2008).

 

 

Introduction to Myself


Hello, my name is Hillary Hines; I'm 23 years old, with many interests and aspirations. Currently, I am attending MMCC to be a legal secretary. I plan to move on to CMU for two more years, and then apply to law school for further study. My ultimate career goal is to be a lawyer/attorney. At MMCC, I am a member of the Phi Theta Kappa Honors Society. (If any of you have the requirements to join, I would suggest doing so. PTK offers many opportunities, being a member will also make you want to work harder to reach, or set, goals.) I really enjoy college; nearly every assignment is a challenge giving you motivation to do better on the next assignment. By the end of the class, you feel your skills have improved significantly. For me, high school was the exact opposite; I quickly became bored and easily frustrated with assignments. Looking back, I believe I was bored because I was not being challenged and therefore I couldn’t excel.

Outside of college, I have many hobbies and interests. I enjoy doing art of any form; I am best at drawing people and painting animals...vise-versa just doesn't work for me. I play several instruments, including: bass, guitar, violin, and a bit of piano/keyboard (I also sing). A lot of my time is devoted to my animals; most of them are rescues and demand a lot of attention. I currently own 4 dogs, 5 cats, 2 birds, and 9 fish. My fish possibly take up most of my time, I used to breed bettas for eight years and sell them to local pet/fish stores, or individuals who requested them. The 6 bettas I now have are my babies and happily retired. I also own 3 guppies, they were rescues. I could probably stay on the topic of fish for hours; but I'd rather not write a book here (lol). I hope you all enjoy this semester! Good luck =D!